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yeah a random neon raving loop.
took a few hours.
[ btw im 13 ]
I cant believe you spent more than a few seconds on this, it looks like you might as well have made a gif and told someone to put on headphones and continuously keep skipping the song after 3 seconds.
It started out as a decent concept and then it just kind of fell apart, when it looped so badly, both in the animation and the music. A lot more work is required to get this piece up to standard and as a result, you would be able to create a much better piece.
Stick with the concept, but get some other things to use in the piece perhaps some plot would be able to have a guy that was trying to make the forest neon again, after some chromatic thief had stolen the colours out of it and the forest lost it's cool glow.
Try experimenting with phosphorescence and darker backgrounds - not everything needs to be bright, to make an impression. I can see a lot of potential, but it needs some work to turn that into real progress.
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This is my review of you animtion:
Animation; 4 /10
Audio; 5 / 10
Content; 2 / 10
Okay, the animation was not brilliant, however the artwork, particularly the trees was not bad at all. The animation was fairly smooth but there was not enough, there are many animators that have loops, take Weebl for example. But there was not enough here. Audio was not great, again if there was more I would give more of a mark however there was not enough audio to listen to. There was little content as well, nothing really to make this animation stand out from others. Try making a longer animation, it does not have to be half an hour long, maybe start with a story board, do the animation for it and then add the music.
All in all; 3 / 10
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