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Jul 4, 2010 | 4:00 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place July 5, 2010

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Author Comments

This was originally for Halloween of last year but never got around to finish it. I decided to end it differently from what I had planned. It's my first animation that isn't based on other people's characters.

The intro is simple as I want people to focus on the movie itself.

I hope you enjoy it and I will be looking forward to any feedback, both positive and negative.

Enjoy :)

Edit 1 - I switched the loader to one with a play button so it doesn't loop.
Edit 2 - WOOO! My first award, a daily 3rd. I'm so happy. Thank you everyone for voting for me. :D
Edit 3 - I swear I must be dreaming.....FRONT PAGE!..OMGGGG..I'm bouncing up and down with excitement and joy and everything. WOW. THANK YOU NEWGROUNDS AND E VERYONE. If I didn't have a horrible sunburn right now I'd go out and celebrate. :D

Reviews


JohnnybdesignJohnnybdesign

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting!

The idea of one being drawn, dying, with its own blood is really interesting.
I like the movie despite the fact that the animation was not top notch.
Like a few other reviewers, I was left pleased and wanting more:

I want more
I want gore
Blood on the canvas and the floor.


Keith responds:

I could make more
just give it time
I like your review
and that you make it rhyme

Thanks for enjoying it. If I think that a 2nd one would fit instead of just making a sequel for the hell of it then I'd do it and definitely try to make it better than the first. :)


xXDXxxXDXx

Rated 5 / 5 stars

creepy

This was slightly disturbing ok really disturbing but i liked it


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Keith responds:

WATCH OUT! BEHIND YOU!

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it. I was going for the scary kind of creepy type movie and I think I achieved it. :D


ShdwProductionsShdwProductions

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Okaaay...

Right, well that was a bit odd...

Animation; 7 / 10
Audio; 6 / 10
Content; 6 / 10

Alright let me see...the animation was not too bad, it could have been a bit better, but it was certainly the best aspect of the animation! The audio was not fantastic, I would have liked to have more music in it, giving it a bit more atmosphere, maybe that it something that you can add later? The content was a little confusing, if not wierd, still it was different from the usual stuff on Newgrounds, so I have to give you points for originality.

All in all; 6 / 10


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Keith responds:

Thanks man. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm quite happy with it. It's not bad for my first try at something original. I love reading each review because it helps me and gives me ideas for what I could improve and how I can do it. Thanks once again for the review. :)


That1Guy1432That1Guy1432

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

pretty good

Yea i felt it kinda ended suddenly and wanted there to be more. but this was very well done. great concept. Really cant stand people who call this crap. cuz even tho this wasnt the greatest flash ever, It was alot better than what they are giving you credit for. This is better than ALOT of flashes that come thru here. It had actual good animation, much more than over half of flashes that make it here. All those who are giving this a bad score, hating on this flash, stop looking for perfection. This is art, and i would like to see you try to make something better


Keith responds:

Thanks man. Not everyone is going to enjoy it, I can't knock them for hating on it if they choose to. It seems enough people enjoyed it and that is what matters to me. It's definitely not the worst flash but there is always room for improvement and as an artist it helped me become better and the more I do, the better I become, at least I hope so. :P I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)


SydneyStarrSydneyStarr

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Eh.

Started out okay, but left me wanting more.


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Keith responds:

Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it. There can always be another if I see fit. Maybe then it will satisfy people's thirst for more. :)