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The show is about a small little bunny who is always annoyed and now hes going to get revenge on all the people who annoyed and taunted him.
(PS.Something i have no idea why happend to the screen plz dont vote to harsh on that)
You have potential!
Both your art and animation has potential!
It has good facial expressions and camera angles. I liked the stapler and the bullet. (although a sawed off shotgun shoots lead shot rather than bullets!)
As many beginning flash animators tend to do, a lot the animation is going way to slow. Just shorten the motion tweens a bit and you should be fine. I also think you shouldn't use "Times New Roman", as it really doesn't suit movies. The text is also selectable which, of course, doesn't make any sense. You shouldn't just cut off the music all the time but let the tracks flow more into each other.
Considering that you're thirteen years old and this is your first flash movie on Newgrounds, I think you could be doing great stuff in the near future! Just don't stop here and continue practising. Good luck.
the movie is somehow funny. and bloody. but everything takes too long...
like the beginning, and the starring, also the muisic just stops, the screen is black.
then just a new music appears. also the characters don't really have a body when they are close, or are walking, and the drawings aren't really nice (they are but not really much). and the turtle shoots 3 times but theres only 1 bullet. and after that the screen is black aigain and just another song starts.. Next time you should really try to organize everything.. because it's annoying to watch.
Was that an automatic stapler?
Pretty freaking awesome. The animation was pretty good and it had an interesting story. Some back story animation would be nice. Also I noticed several white lines around the animation. Are the dimensions correct? Anyways, good movie. Hope to see more from you soon.
A short film about a park bench
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