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Hello,this is my first story/animation ever. Here is how I made it,first,I made a W M V File,then I imported it in to flash,then I saved it as a S W F File.That's how I made it.
eh, for a first time it was ok.
For a first time I think that it was ok. As a review it was not that good. I think that you should be proud that you are gaining experience as a flash animater that you were able to create this. Now just hone your skills and widen your technique and come up with something great. You will be capable of great things if you keep at it.
Why did you make the WMV and then import it? You could have easily made this whole thing in flash. And it would have looked better.
I'm not good at drawing and moving the characters.
I don't know....
The first part made me feel like the frist time i played pokemon, but you blew it with lugia useing hypnotise
Put more time into it next time. WHile i have nothing against short movies, this was very short. And very uninteresting. More plot maybe? If that doesn't work go full on random!!! Put more time in effects, drawing and such.
You clearly don't know anything about flash or Pokemon.
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