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It's my first so constructive criticism.
I liked it i really did! But the animation could have been done a little better. Nice first attempt!
I enjoyed the animation. The idea was pretty funny, but I would recommend improving the presentation by adding music/sound throughout the entire piece, instead of just at parts. It seems weird when there's action in the movie, but no music to accompany it.
i like it... is very nice 4 be the first one... nice work...
this is very good only things it needs is A: more time on the drawings and B:it needs some voice other than that it ws pretty good hope this helps you bye!!!!!
too bad the wire will snap due to constant spinning.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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