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I'M EATING A TREAT DERRICK
[Keep an eye out next week for Part 5]
Ahahaha Resident evil outbreak file#2 was that annoying and that is completely accurate
Raccoons? I get it! A slight let down.
I know you have heard this before. I'm just going to point out that those Raccoons is good running gag, for about 5 seconds. It gets distracting from the already srained comedy. You have seemed to put a little more of...how do I say random situational comedy. This can work if it is evenly balanced a story to help make the jokes seem unexpected, thus making them a little more funny.
An example was in your first part of sars. "It was a normal day in Raccoon city when BAM! raccoon to the face. If you focused on making the story a little bit it would be a little more funny. I am saying this because I just rewatched your previous work before reviewing this one.
Ok that is the bad part. Here's some good things I saw. I really enjoyed the part with ada. That was entertaining. I also liked most of the parts with leon. Didn't get the part with KEVIN! Kinda stale (snikers from previous episode.) Even though you took a while to create this one I noticed a few of the jokes reused from the trailer from the third part. I was a little let down to not see some of the other jokes that we were "promised" to see in the trailer. Make sure to fall back on what you promise. I mean everyone enjoys a good key ring joke.
If you continue your series, do what you want, but keep in mind you don't have to force your jokes. If you creat a story the humor will come naturally...of course you know how to add some WTF jokes here and ther. Sorry for the long winded speech.
i kinda think that was funny!!!???!!!???
keep making them!
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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