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'The Sad Tale Of Bad Breath Joe' is the animated version of my comic story. I hope you guys like that.
I'd love your comments. :-)
Read Below xD
i have a friend , and his breath smells really bad , like really bad and he is allways chewing mentos or something like that to make it a little bit better but after i saw that ... i jizzed in my pants! relly good art :) 5/5 10/10
Should load first.
Since the quality of the flash is more than most, I really think you should've put a loader in the beginning. It just jumps into play and it stops here and there and I actually haven't been able to finish it because of that.
At first I thought this was stolen.
Cause I swear I saw it before then you said it was your comic and I saw it on your art page. Very nice job!
thats a lesson for all you kids dont drink acid
Cute, in its own way...
...but there's not actually enough 'animation' to qualify it for the title. The art's fine, a very distinctive style, but, well, this is just a comic (re?)done in Flash when it didn't really need to be so. Assuming this represents your first time working with Flash, an experimental step up, that would be perfectly understandable, but still.
Oh, and also: a Restart link/button at the end is almost always far preferable to letting the movie loop around endlessly. I had to turn my speakers off to type this out, the sound just got so repetitive...
Thanks for your comments.
I added a restart button on the end.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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