Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
Triumphant return to animation, I bring you lecherous cat
alot better then what i have seen all night good show bro
liked the art style
could make the chars voice alil bit more clear
Nice work. :D
I really like your art style. Make the sound at the end quit looping though... it makes me mad. xD Otherwise pretty good.
Visuals: above average. I liked the fluid look and the fact that the characters did not quite fit in their lines. Fairly sure I have seen similar aesthetics before, but I am not sure where. In any case, it is a good look. And the background is just varied enough to keep from being an eyesore and allowing it to fit in, well, the background.
Sound: Pretty good. Not much to critique, really. Just the few mewls and the punchline. It all sounded fine. The song at the end is fine as well, but its looping is a touch annoying. Maybe let it lapse into silence so I don't have to listen to it while I write this review?
But the flaw is this: Show, don't tell! The cat is just sitting there meowing. Nothing about it suggests hot or bothered, making the single joke of the animation feel a little out of place. I understand that humor is found in subtlety, but there is a difference between that and referring to something that isn't there.
A short film about a park bench
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.