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Jun 20, 2010 | 3:44 PM EDT

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Author Comments

helo my name is edgard and i am 10... this is my submision 4 newground.. it is a story for a strawberry named strawbert who is look for true love...

i am use blue man groupe music because he is alien and he kno what is like to be in a new wierd world..

this is part 1. i will try to part 2 and 3 soon. thank

Reviews


paradoxed258paradoxed258

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Absolutely terrible, as expected from a clock

The only thing more surprising than how terrible your flash is compared to the score is how idiotic people on this site are who believe you're 10 and from iceland. Any idiot can click on your profile to see you're an 18 year old idiot from canada with nothing better to do than shit out crap like this. It seems to work for you though, so keep lying about your age and ethnicity, it will get your farther than your flash talent ever could.
You get 2 stars for managing to put a decent song to the backround.


ClockRadio responds:

thank, bluemangroup is best. thank


BBHawkBBHawk

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well Well

Not bad overall for your age intresting story but the grammer was so bad I could hardly focus please your 10 yars old learn to spell and use words correctly.


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ClockRadio responds:

i will try to better grammar!! thank. i am 10 years


ZeroAmaterasuZeroAmaterasu

Rated 2 / 5 stars

All things considered...

If this was an american over 14 years old, it'd be pitifully sad. But, if your telling the truth about being from Iceland, and being 10 years old, then I'm incredibly amazed. Keep trying, and by the time your most of the people's age who submits things, your stuff will be great...

Not bad, all things considered^.^


ClockRadio responds:

thank u, u make me almos cry! amazing


keiferrkeiferr

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Touching.

The horrid English was too much to bear eventually, but the story was very cute. Props and goodluck.


ClockRadio responds:

i will try more! thnk to review


xanacexanace

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Loved it

Very well done on the story, And made me laugh at parts.. GJ


ClockRadio responds:

thank for reviews