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This took awhile to make but I'm glad with the finished result. Please leave helpful reviews. And do you think I could ever get famous on Newgrounds over the years? Thanks for watching!
I think I've seen you before.
You're OBVIOUSLY ripping the style right off of Eddsworld, AND using the music he used in another one of his flash movies. It'd be nice if you did something original for once :/
Yeah I was inspired by Eddsworld and I like the song. And I asked him on formsprings if it was ok to have his style and he said it was fine for a beginner as long as it eventually turns into something of my own. Now before you go and hate think about how hard it is to animate and the work people put into these. Just because it's similar to Eddsworld does not mean I'm stealing his movies.
Your animation style is okay. You got your point across. Seems like your message is just: "Animation is hard." Which it is. .... Ah hell, I'll give you a couple of more points because it's the most thought-provoking thing I've seen on Newgrounds in quite a while.
If a person seems to be trying to improve, I will be a bit generous with point and as helpful as I can with suggestions. However, especially nowadays, there are people on Newgrounds who don't even try to improve, and even seem strive for mediocrity--which I think is the real Newgrounds problem.
Trying to make something that people like is frustrating, I'm sure. Focus on animating better and telling a good story and you'll get better scores over time. (No short animation loops, please.)
I'd say you're doing fine.
Good, but could improve.
I found that the animation style was pretty nice, just a little bit choppy at points. Over time I know that will improve. As for text, I think you should try and use something more along the lines of a text everyone has or be able to make your font in its own layer rasterized, otherwise it will show up as times new roman for everyone else. If you are going for the style of thick outlining, keep it consistent and make the computer and desk like that as well.
If you want, make it a little more shded, unless you are going for that style.
Nice job overall.
I thought it was really cool and funny!
Old idea but with potential
The point you are making is not new seeing as anyone who has looked at anything under judgement will know about the crap flash animations that you're criticizing. With the point not being the merit of the flash that leaves the skill of animation. You have potential but the animation does not reflect much dedication and could be improved if you spent more time drawing the character in detail.
If you found a more original criticism of newgrounds (or a different topic altogether) and spent more time drawing the characters then you could definitely do well on newgrounds.
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