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This is a guy who knows alot about anime and wants to share his knowledge!
Not bad, but could be improved
Well, I think I'm not gonna say anything you have not read before. ^^U
You should have elaborated this a bit more. Background, music (a loop would be fine, because it stops after some time), text (as some people have said to you: it is occasionally hard to read), animations (or at least some changes in the image, depending on the thing you are saying)...
In short, a bit of customization and not just a static image and plain text. Also, there are some typos over there and a little lack of information (for example, neko characters are just humanoids with some feline characteristics as neko = cat, not any animal - that is kemonomimi, wich also includes neko characters, of course).
I see this more like a blog entry than an informative flash... Very, very simple. But, hey! I think this could be a great idea to support and advise all those people who don't know about manga or anime!
Just keep it up and improve your flash and drawing skills! I hope to see more of your work in the future! :D
Thank You! You didn't just spit in my face.
informative, but the text is occasionally hard to read. i think it's a nice way to introduce people into the world of anime and manga.
Thank You, I appreciate your review.
ALOT IS NOT A WORD
A fair amount of the words are difficult to read because of the black font being invisible in the thick black lines of the drawing.
The font should be separate, and I would suggest having different anime pictures appearing on the bottom to correlate with the text above.
You have a lot of knowledge and are very informative, it's good to share. But you need more then good knowledge to spread the word, you have to make it interesting, and easy to read. A static picture that hides some of your letters and words just isn't going to cut it.
Also, every time you say "alot" baby Jesus cries, because I punch him.
Thanks for the info, I know about the words that collide with the pic. Sorry about the alot problem. Just don't punch jesus anymore. (Wait... I am an atheist, what do I care?)
It was very informative but the text was kinda hard to read. Try to work on that in further submissions!
Thanks, I will work harder on the next one.
Nothing's perfect, but...
Your movie has several good points: the music is good and not too loud, wich make the reading easier. The information in the texte are correct and the way you bring them ( making like if it was the guy that was telling it all) is interesting.
BUT ( because there's always one) it's static. There's nothing movieng, nothing to catch the attention of the viers. You need too had, you know, this little animated detail that catch the eye and had life to your movie (blinking eye, moving clouds, floatting hair...). Also, the texte is hard to read: it's small, compact and (sometimes) black on black. You got to take care of this. The simplest solution would be to had a box at the bottom of your screen to write the texte. You can give it any style you want to ( robotic, romantic, comic). Or you can write it in a manga style bubble, to support you subject.
Last thing, when you had your song to your project, go in its properties and scroll the box where it's written "repeat". Select "Loop" and your song will play in loop during all the time the viewer will be, well, viewing.
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