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I Hope I Don't Get Eaten

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Jun 17, 2010 | 7:14 PM EDT

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I made this back in the day. I'm uploading it because I liked it when I made it, and it's still a pretty nice piece. My voice acting and animation skills have improved since then, but this deserves a place among the rest of my Flashes.

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Stickman91Stickman91

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Cute. :)

Although the animation isn't anything special, the narration is pretty clear and the writing is great. "I Hope I Don't Get Eaten" could easily pass for a classic children's poem.

Presentation-wise, the Flash isn't bad as a whole, but it could use some touching up here and there. For example, I thought the sound effects used for the bear and bugs were a bit abrupt; they would've been more pleasing to listen to if you had made them fade out, as opposed to cutting them off sharply.

Some small additions to the animation wouldn't have hurt either. The rabbit scene would've been even funnier if a nice, loud "CHOMP!" sound effect played while the text scrolled in front of the sleeping guy, and seeing some twinkling stars in the sky would've been cool. Additional text effects would also help spice things up a bit.

Although this is somewhat unrefined and just a tad bland, it's still very nice, especially considering that you made it when you were less experienced than you are now. Good work!

Just out of curiosity, exactly how long ago is "back in the day?"


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BLIZZARDLIZARDBLIZZARDLIZARD

Rated 3 / 5 stars

weird.

why is he content under a tree but not so while he`s in bed, and not the other way around?

the animation needs quite a bit of smoothing and retrys.


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Rabid-Animals responds:

It's about being comfortable outdoors.


New2thisGameNew2thisGame

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Meh,

It was alright. Funny rabbit part.


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Rabid-Animals responds:

You get it.