see i was invited to a collab. so i did this peice. but then it kinda slowed to a halt. nd i was told i should put it up. so i thought yea why not im not touchin it at all neways. so yea. enjoy. or not u kno its up to u. i love my fans and i appreciate ur support. nd for those critics...yea, i kno it sux. reminding me wont do me any good, ive already gotten 10 times better since this video already.
Another note...
You need to work on you titles and subtitles, They need to be seen, and pop. The purple was hard to read at the end, try creating you own font that can easily change colors of the "OUTLINES" so that the words do pop out, that way we can actually read what it says. As far as everything else goes, a few of your backrounds had issues, but I'm not that picky. You did a good job. 9/10
AW MAN!!!!!!!!
dude i love 5/5 and 10/10.
:-P thnx!
not bad
it was pretty good and im with shadowwalker15 I personally think sonic/mario collabs with DBZ effects are awsome. Anyway I gave you a 9 because it had no plot, not to criticise or anything but next time try to make at least maybe a simple intro sceen to at least show the characters and a reason for doing for whatever they're doing, or even a simple loading screen that shows the characters. Anyway keep up the good work and I hope you make more.
i wanted to put in a plot. i evn had one written down. but the collab owner said (no plot, mindless violence is the key here) *sad*
Hmmmmmm....
Look, the whole DBZ/Sonic/Mario Crossover is getting a little overused. Try to stay away from that... i'll tell you myself, I have gotten absolutely nowhere using that fight style, I've barely missed awards (6th Place on Wario vs Mecha 1 & 2, and Sandbag's Ultimate Destruction) and i think it would be wise if i warn you not to use this style.
The animation was good but could use some improvements. mainly the only thing that bugs me is that this is just another DBZ fight with Bowser & Sonic. Stick to the character's original moves and maybe try to smooth out some of the movements. Go by that and you could get really high in spriting
Thanks
~liljoey50~
2/5
5/10
yea, i see what u mean. however in my defense, i was told to make this for a collaboration tht was supposed to have random violence of this kind of nature, i mean im still tryin to wean myself off of this but i couldnt pass up sumthin like a darksonic asskickin... still thnx for the tip.
aww...
you ruinde the ending with the title... :'(
srry...