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Protagonist Ep3

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rated 1.93 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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antagonist
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Uploaded
Jun 15, 2010 | 1:26 AM EDT

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Author Comments

EDIT: Please note that I am a beginner, feedback is greatly appreciated, but telling me 'it sucks' isn't helpful. This video came out of judgeship at a decent score but sharply dropped afterward, which leaves me wondering if i did this one worse than my last, or just a different audience. Let me know what I've done right as well as wrong.

The voice acting shall improve! Voices were done by myself and Jay (who does not have a newgrounds account) Continuing to improve hopefully, I've added a loading bar, and made this video longer than the previous ones. Note that sound does begin about midway through, so make sure your speakers are not set to full blast unless you like them that way.

So you know what is going on: The creator's pencil was stolen by the antagonist, and without it, he is limited to changing existing creations of his own, and making simple items. As the series goes, art upgrades, music, sound effects, voice acting and plot all are going to improve, and once the pencil is back, more characters will start to appear. Its sort of a 'watching it grow' experience, except instead of it growing between episodes, it grows as you are watching.

Reviews


vgprodegyvgprodegy

Rated 1 / 5 stars

ehhhh

it sucked, but it needed a better plot, characters, setting.......


Galdon responds:

Improvements are on their way; If you watched the previous episodes you would know that the Antagonist stole the Creator's pencil and they need to get it back before making the world much better. There is plot, but most series don't hand it to you all at once.


thompsonmustdiethompsonmustdie

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not quite there.

It has potential.
Needs:
1. smoother animation.
2. Music.
3. More plot.


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Galdon responds:

Smoother animation will come with practice which i'm trying to get. The other two are in the works. Thank you for the feedback though.