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i like bonauqa
so when are you going to kill these people? hmmmmmmmm
i meant to vote 10
Ok, started off good. I can let a movie go with bad animation if it has a good moral story behind it. You know, the way yours started off? Anyway, because you butt fucked the moral of the story, I'm going to give you a review of everythign that was wrong with your animation, I hope there are enough charecters left.
For starters, Text:
Unoriginal. Standard. Not impressive what-so-ever.
Bad choice. Red. Did you ever stop to think that there might be an issue where the text overlaps with the animated sprite of the red dog you got, or did that just happen to slip your mind?
Animation in general:
Good job with the movie clips! Next time perhaps you should do something with them? You know, like make them move? Or... Something?
Not likely it was your own, so Im going to have to give you an F- on the fact that it sounded granulated as shit when you imported it.
Remember: Quality over ease of finding.
If you find an audio file that you kinda want, but it sounds like its comming out of a basement thoguht pipeing that has rats blocking most of the path, perhaps you should look for another one?
Message: Had me going there, thinking that you actualy had a plan for this thing. What I thoguht was going to happen was you were going to play that stupid repetitive clip while your message was displayed and then you would show some type of guy getting his revenge, but nope. All that lead up for nothing. Kinda like when a girl wont let you finish, ya know? Thats kinda the feeling I get from this movie. A HUGE build up and then! Awe... Nothing.
Honnestly, the thing im most impressed with is that you were able to find something that kinda seemed like it went togeather. I mean, downloading the dog begging for the snack? That would have prolly taken me two whole minutes to find. But the audio, You must have looked for a whole whopping 5 minutes to find that at that quality.
Seriously dude, when I think that it would take longer to upload this movie than it took you to make it, it means you got a whole lotta work to do.
Thank you, please try again.
you think i will read this but i wont
It was not good
The ending ruined any meaning the movie could have had. Also the animation loop made the whole thing overly repetative.
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