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Jun 14, 2010 | 2:23 PM EDT

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Took me a couple months due to procrastination but its finally here so i can start on other projects!

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bob-swivbob-swiv

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars June 15, 2010

Nothing fun or new or worth my time

The drawings weren't bad but the animation was poor but it was smooth, the scenes like everyone has commented on went on for far too long. The sfx of the bell was slightly annoying after a while and it was nice to see you broke it up with some of your own sfx, the dialoge was good and it worked well, the animation on the mouths was pretty perfect apart from the one scene " i need to learn to keep my mouth shut"....he needs to learn to keep his mouth on the same part of his face. All in all not a bad flash by any means but a long way of a great flash, smooth up the animations have more things happen and consider writting a full script because i felt as though this could be a really fun concept for a newgrounds flash series.


MrKidNinja responds:

Thanks that was an awesome response and i think you mean I need to learn how to keep his mouth in the same part of his face other than he needs to learn lol.


YoDoubeGabbaYoDoubeGabba

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 14, 2010

gets out at noon?

kinda boring.. not bad. 11 periods? and he still got out at noon? need to pay attn. to detail. Over all it needs work, could be a little quicker, its kinda slow. not bad tho.

5/10

3/5


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BPMrecordsBPMrecords

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 14, 2010

wow

you have way too many periods lol
good luck the other 4 days



aznpandaaznpanda

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 14, 2010

Nice audio and graphics

but it was a bit slow paced.



ArmisseaArmissea

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 14, 2010

Speed

Kinda slow in terms of character movement it needs to be a bit faster

so the person watching can get into it

animation is alright in terms of the drawing but once again

somewhat unwatchable