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Took me a couple months due to procrastination but its finally here so i can start on other projects!
Nothing fun or new or worth my time
The drawings weren't bad but the animation was poor but it was smooth, the scenes like everyone has commented on went on for far too long. The sfx of the bell was slightly annoying after a while and it was nice to see you broke it up with some of your own sfx, the dialoge was good and it worked well, the animation on the mouths was pretty perfect apart from the one scene " i need to learn to keep my mouth shut"....he needs to learn to keep his mouth on the same part of his face. All in all not a bad flash by any means but a long way of a great flash, smooth up the animations have more things happen and consider writting a full script because i felt as though this could be a really fun concept for a newgrounds flash series.
Thanks that was an awesome response and i think you mean I need to learn how to keep his mouth in the same part of his face other than he needs to learn lol.
gets out at noon?
kinda boring.. not bad. 11 periods? and he still got out at noon? need to pay attn. to detail. Over all it needs work, could be a little quicker, its kinda slow. not bad tho.
you have way too many periods lol
good luck the other 4 days
Nice audio and graphics
but it was a bit slow paced.
the animation was fine i guess... the story... well that's not THAT bad.. but the fact that every scene was at least twice the length it needs to be just made this soooo sloooow and boring.....
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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