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Flash is hard.
But I <3 you, Newgrounds.
You may click the "X" if you're through! 'Cause it loops!
im still amzed
hey, I'm el3ctrodude (im using my brothers account). I've been checking your account this past year. I guess you aren't finishing this project. but hey, I just gotta say how amazing this project is. If you have the finished one I would LOVE to see it.
The models are awesome. You could make some mind blowing movie if you are willing to put in alot of effort and patience. The thing that is lacking and is also the hardest is the animation.
I'll look into a form of animation, and I'll work from there!
not that good
it looked a bit bad but it is good flash and yes flash is hard
Thank you for your comment!
I'm sorry about the overall quality, but I will try my best to improve!
And yes, flash is difficult!
Really now, is this necessary?
I'm halving the score you would have got on account of this not needing to be uploaded to a flash site.
If you actually modeled this in Blender or whatever yourslef, massive kudos. The models are great! At this point, you should learn a bit of animation to spice things up! But if you didn't O.O then you really should work on figuring out flash animation, because still shots of rendered models with subs a gripping story does not make. Also, you should think about some voice acting, but as you gain in popularity, you can get help from fellow NewGrounds members on that front, in case your voice just doesn't cut it :P
Thank you for your review!
I will work on capturing motion and animation!
This was an experiment to see if I could actually accomplish a flash of this type!
If I can find it in myself to proceed with the next episode, I am sure that I may impress you next time!
It really isnt that bad but you need animation to make this really come alive
and I do agree the music was kinda FF like and so was the sketch which is a plus for me..and alas my final problem with your piece is that the supposed "Boy" looked like a girl all the way...like there is no resemblence to a male what so ever in that face lol, anyhow 3/10 3/5
Thank for for taking time to review this!
I will work on the animation!
Also, I do get carried away by personal taste, forgive me!
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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