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Very quick flash, took only like 2 days.
i really liked this. the music is great and it told a really nice short story. one problem - it looped. if you're new to flash, just type [stop();] without the brackets in the action script for the last frame and it will stop it. also, you could probably do with a load screen. i mean, its really short, so it won't take long to load, but it makes your flash look more professional. the credits also rolled by too fast. however, all these technical details don't really take too much away from this. my one suggestion for content would be to make the whole thing just a bit longer, focus more on the stick boy and the giant at the beginning and maybe show the two kids at the end playing together or something. you have the "meat" of the flash here, but some condiments would be nice.
I liked watching this, was 'inspiring' and the music fit well, but the music seems to mess up after the loop (playing it twice at the same time slightly offset from eachother) . IMMD anyways.
Nice job going from stickman to ...
This is beautiful...
The backgroundmusic fits the animation very well and I really liked what you have done with the transition from a stickman to 'real world' people.
And one more thing: This would still be great even if it took you 2 weeks. ;)
I get the story but it's just way too short. I do like the animation though. :D
A short film about a park bench
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