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**SORRY! NO PRE-LOADER. I'm still new at this and I don't know how to do it....
Actually I don't even know if the flash works on here....*
EDIT 1: Fixed the black bars problem. Also, keep the reviews coming! I need the feedback, good or not. Also, please read the authors responses, some questions may be answered there, thanks!
This is a demo/alpha version for my flash, Bad People! Which will be out soon, I hope.
Song: Puzzle - Girugamesh
Voice: done by me.
Mixcraft 4.5 / Audacity
Windows Media Player
Paint tool SAI
>> Also found on FB and soon to be on deviantART :)
PS: This is kind of my first flash...it may not be complete but it will be!
damn good 5outa5
2 thumbs up
Thank you so much for the review <3
Well im new in this too.. but with internet help its kind of easy to make a preloader :) any way... i did not like the repeating!! jajaj good luck for the next one :)
Thanks for the review!
Hehe, yeah. I need to learn to use flash too.
The repeating got on my nerves too ;; !~
Pure sketch demo.
I like the character design, albeit still a rough sketch. I was a little annoyed watching it, it felt like that old-video effect, I don't know what it's called, at the beginning kept through the whole thing. And I'm not sure if those black bars are there for a reason. Wondering if you're just going to explain the story through words plainly put on the screen.
My first review, by the way.
Thank you for the review!
The black bars were suppose to add a "movie" effect but I guess I forgot to fix the sizes when I uploaded it.
It'll be better with time, I know it and I hope you'll see it once it's truly complete!
edit: Forgot to answer your other question there, the story will be explained through voice + animation but on the screen there will be little drawings/transitions with a bit of explanations or thoughts of the character)
ummmmm what the hell is that. there is no point. the voice **** (sorry i know it your voice - - but it looks like a robot) . I dont hear the music.
I know its a demo but its explains anything. you should explains more because now i tink it ****.sry but no.
Thanks for the review.
I think it sounds like a robot because Audacity messed with my voice when I removed some "noise".
Keep trying and I bet you'll be able put a pre-loader on it in no time.
The sound is in need of some fixing and the acting could use some more emphasis and dramatic pauses.
Also, the sketches were great.
Thanks for the review!
I hope so too. The sound needs a lot of fixing and the truth is, I'm not going to be the one doing the voices for that character next time.
Thanks! I try to make the best sketches I can so cleanup will be easier.
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