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Jun 6, 2010 | 9:46 PM EDT

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**SORRY! NO PRE-LOADER. I'm still new at this and I don't know how to do it....
Actually I don't even know if the flash works on here....*

EDIT 1: Fixed the black bars problem. Also, keep the reviews coming! I need the feedback, good or not. Also, please read the authors responses, some questions may be answered there, thanks!

This is a demo/alpha version for my flash, Bad People! Which will be out soon, I hope.

Song: Puzzle - Girugamesh
Voice: done by me.

Programs used:
Mixcraft 4.5 / Audacity
Windows Media Player
Sorenson Squeeze
Paint tool SAI

>> Also found on FB and soon to be on deviantART :) <<

PS: This is kind of my first may not be complete but it will be!



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Reupload with new techniques! I saw your mention of keeping it up for a reason (posterity?) maybe keep this animation behind a play button which would be inset in the replay screen for the new version, assuming you want to do that.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

very good

damn good 5outa5

10 stars

2 thumbs up

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JadenPrinceton responds:

Thank you so much for the review <3


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


Well im new in this too.. but with internet help its kind of easy to make a preloader :) any way... i did not like the repeating!! jajaj good luck for the next one :)

JadenPrinceton responds:

Thanks for the review!
Hehe, yeah. I need to learn to use flash too.
The repeating got on my nerves too ;; !~


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Pure sketch demo.

I like the character design, albeit still a rough sketch. I was a little annoyed watching it, it felt like that old-video effect, I don't know what it's called, at the beginning kept through the whole thing. And I'm not sure if those black bars are there for a reason. Wondering if you're just going to explain the story through words plainly put on the screen.

My first review, by the way.

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JadenPrinceton responds:

Thank you for the review!
The black bars were suppose to add a "movie" effect but I guess I forgot to fix the sizes when I uploaded it.

It'll be better with time, I know it and I hope you'll see it once it's truly complete!
edit: Forgot to answer your other question there, the story will be explained through voice + animation but on the screen there will be little drawings/transitions with a bit of explanations or thoughts of the character)


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


ummmmm what the hell is that. there is no point. the voice **** (sorry i know it your voice - - but it looks like a robot) . I dont hear the music.
I know its a demo but its explains anything. you should explains more because now i tink it ****.sry but no.

JadenPrinceton responds:

Thanks for the review.
I think it sounds like a robot because Audacity messed with my voice when I removed some "noise".