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Jun 5, 2010 | 3:11 PM EDT

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Mister Sweet's watching a flash movie untill ...

I'm not sure if this movie is a comedy or a drama. I think it's both.

Enjoy

Edited: I uploaded a new version. The guy at the end looks better.

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Y2k4everY2k4ever

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 5, 2010

first off

if you gona use pixles use it for everything otherwise it looks bad, but deacent at most.


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Abracadabra123 responds:

So pixels and vector graphics won't mix. I'll think to it.


JohnJenkins2315JohnJenkins2315

Rated 0 / 5 stars June 5, 2010

Boring

That's all I can say.



jacobwillmanjacobwillman

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars June 5, 2010

If you're a beginner...

If you're a beginner... then this is okay. seriously try to use more motion from your subjects. camera language is good, but overusing zooms, pans and other thing hurt your story by making it unwatchable. Oh.. and please please please get away from microsoft paint. PUT IT DOWN, NOW. we don't want to have to hurt you.

get a copy of Corel Draw or something with a better palate of tools and options... there are TONS of free open source vector graphics programs out there that you could download, or just pony up and buy a copy of Adobe Illustrator and Adobe Flash. it's pricey but it's worth not having your animations look terrible.

also, the story was very difficult to follow. i get it: his monitor explodes and he's upset that he has to buy a new one. but nothing that happened to him was very funny or interesting.

keep doing it though... you've got potential, and obviously you want to learn to do this animating thing.


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Abracadabra123 responds:

Here the story: after the monitor blew out, Mister Sweet remembers how fun he had with his computer. Then he comes in the computer repair center to fix his computer.

It's not worth to pay $600 for softwares just for making free movies.

Thanks for the rest of the review. I'll check for free tools.


Ryajin-GekiRyajin-Geki

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 5, 2010

It was ok.

Just the music was kind of bothersome to be honest. Not saying it didn't fit. Some dialogue would have been nice, because I didn't know if at the end if he could buy a new screen since they were all broken. Or if that was the pile of tvs where he was supposed to leave his.


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Abracadabra123 responds:

Here the story: after the monitor blew out, Mister Sweet remembers how fun he had with his computer. Then he comes in the computer repair center to fix his computer.


ZeryousZeryous

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars June 5, 2010

Well

I got confused at the beginning but I figured it out near the end.

3/10
1/5


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