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idk i got bored yes thats my voice and yeah its not finished lol
Animation is near flawless
Audio needs work though as mentioned below.
needs A LITTLE MORE WORK
Not too bad...
okay, so I'm judging this as a work in progress...
aside from what the first review had to say(which I agree with)
the extended assaults during the portion of the fight on the ground seemed a little drawn-out. probably just the repetition mentioned by Aerobian-Angel...
also, the ground exploding(when it shot sonic into space) could use quite a bit of touch-up.
I have to reiterate the comment on the voice audio. it's very low quality and lagging.
on the plus side, once the fight started, i didn't even notice the music until about halfway through. It really set the mood for the fight and flowed with it. the sound effects, while low quality, were timed exceptionally well.
7. I can easily see this as a 9 or even a 10 with a little more work.
It's a good start...
... but's there's PLENTY of room for improvement.
First of all, the audio is laggy, repetitive, and low quality. Might I suggest using better audio resources or cleaning it up yourself. Secondly, the animation itself is great, but too many times the transitions get a bit choppy. Add in some more frames to make it more fluid, and you'll do fine. Third, when the get into those "mini-fights" (the ones when they're in each others' faces) they use the same moves over and over, which detracts some of the essence from that brawling-experience that we love ever-so much...
Besides those slip-ups, you're doing okay so far.
For giving an exceptional work-in-progress that contains some good potential.
Sorry about the audio...you see the thing was that i lost the FLA and i only had the SWF sop i decompiled it and when i didthat the sounds got messed up and i didnt know
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