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My first flash so please go easy on me(give some tips for flash).Me and my wife were watching Sailormoon to remember our youth xD, and I thought of this during a scene.I need to get a graphics table xD.
that sailor moon is a crazy cat.. animation wasnt thaaat great, the artwork was much better, which leads me to believe you have the ability, but didnt spend the time to animate to your highest potential, tuxido mask is a pansy, cant even take an exploding head... good first flash! work on framebyframe smoothness and you could go far!
keep it up!
Thank you. Ill put alot more animation work into my next work im on now
could be better
it should have been longer and should have been a little diffrent ending but the head decap is al right
Looks ok for your first flash. You can draw better than me thats for sure. The colros are bright and vivid and the characters look like how they should be. The sound is a little off sounds like you recorded it with a mic at the TV so better audio would be a nice touch. The sound is a bit loud but it happens to the best of us.
Overall I liked the idea since I'm a big salior moon. Would have been better if there was more to it. Really short and leaves the watcher wanting more and I hope you come up with some more as well. So 6/10 for on par work that I personally like.
Thank you for the tips.The clips off youtube ill mess with the sound and update it.
Solid color contrasts were done well
A short film about a park bench
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