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Adventures of the Flying Dutchman would be the full title, but unfortunately it wouldn't fit :D
Hope you guys enjoy, I consider it my first fully complete original Flash cartoon... sequel's already underway, which should be even better thanks to the learning experience.
Nice, good comedy and charecters and the animation isnt to shabby. Cool art style and world, everything seems fresh and original and i look forward to the sequel!
Thank you good sir. I'm trying to sell the world more than anything else, so you brought a warm feeling to my heart 8D
Tough to Review...
For a first effort, this really shows that you put time and effort into the story and plot elements. Everyone shoud put this much work into their first submission. But it was weak in a few areas. The animation was slow and choppy at times. The voice work also left something to be desired; in many sections it was apparent someone was just reading the lines. Stylistically, the characters and backgrounds looked good. Normally, a good story can overcome weaknesses in the production. This one was just a bit short, as it seems you are still working on your narrative skills as well. I feel you have a lot of potential as a flash storyteller, once you have some experience under your belt. Keep it up.
Thanks for the feedback, though I think a five is a bit harsh for your critique. I didn't do any voices but the hookers :P I hope maybe my sound editing can get better, as it's really not my specialty. This movie was fun (though stressful as hell) to do, as I did it in under two weeks and scrambled for voice actors (it was for a class).
BUT!!! the sound SUCKED!! but still i liked it its ok
Me thumbing around Sound Forge is not a fun effort :P
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