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This is one of my first flashes. I know, it's short, it's ugly, and it's not that funny, but it's okay. If you don't like it, tell me how I can improve and what I'm doing wrong. Thanks.
Iv seen worse animation.
It really wasn't funny. But the animation is okay. I would suggest more time on animation and a lot of time on the writing.
For a first flash its good! The music choices where good in themself I just suggest more animated trasition within music changes. The drawing wasnt brilliant but I still liked it. The things you need are a litte artistic and trasition improvement and then maby a few more jokes!
Not Too Shabby
I have indeed seen worse for a first. I liked the usage of Twilight Princess music in the beginning.
More surprize needed
Funny, but the end should happen so fast that
we have to replay it to get the full shock.
I like it when I have to think about what just happened.
Yea, it is short, but is is great. Thanks.
pretty good for a first flash
It was good but it felt kind of drawn out.
I noticed the only thing moving for a while was the water, maybe have the fishing line sway with the water, or the pole move. Also have the character blink or something. Maybe some leaves blowing around in the background etc.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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