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This thing has been on my plate for about a year and a half.
For some reason I couldn't pull it off.
That's because my voice isn't this awesome.
Anywho, this thing is just TWEENTASTIC.
I wanted it to be simple.
The heat of going through the atmosphere would kill him, and melt the chocolate. Besides, there's gravity, so he would've died by the fall. Especially if he landed on something sharp. other than grass. But he would still die if he landed on grass.)
HES IN SPACE U DICK SO THERES NO GRAVITY!!!!!!!!!!!
Quite a sad story with very odd rhyming.
BW the rhyme scheme and Ave Maria at the end was intense lol
Nice original story, what a dilemma that character had! Sometimes it's hard to write conflict in a short story, but this was very clear. Liked how it was B&W, kept it dramatic.
This could be your masterpiece! im conmoved with this flash.
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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