Good art, sounds and cinematics.
The general art was awesome. So were the sounds, including your voice. The cinematics were good too but that time that you zoomed the vcam to the right when the view was outside the bathroom door was pretty quick. You could've slowed that down at the pace of the stickman walking, but I assume you were trying to avoid that, since you haven't animated movement in a while.
You should practice simple walking loops to get a hang of it. Try using the grid at first (alt + ') and you might finally get used to it and get good pieces of work. Watch yourself walking in the mirror or watch someone else walking until you see what it should look like.
I think you should do some lip syncing. It would be nice and entertaining.
Anyways, I hope this was helpful.