Hitchhiker Helen
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- rated 3.26 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- rabbit
- cliff
- running
- boulder
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- May 23, 2010 | 9:49 PM EDT
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- Movie
- 2.8 mb
Author Comments
So we finished the animation in the end. Here it is. Feedback is always welcome, thanks!
Chris & Dale
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 11, 2011
Great Work Chris
Loved the story, and the splash at the end :P hope unis going good for you man
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 24, 2010
Looks like she's having fun
If she's supposed to be frightened, try widening her eyes, dilating her pupils, and making her flail her arms around. The way she ran looked too much like a jog, and I got the impression she enjoys being chased by boulders.
Maybe she does.
And nothing's stopping the boulder from rolling off the cliff, yet it stops. There should be some reason, even if the boulder is alive and stopped itself. Not only that but she stops too. Without looking back, as if she expected the boulder to stop. She should at least turn around at the edge of the cliff to see that the boulder has stopped.
Not bad, but the gag needs a bit better delivery.
I totally agree with you. Dale did the artwork and storyboard, and I just did the animation. When I brought all this up with Dale, his response was, "Fuck it". We're busy with our deadlines and that animation was something that just needed to be over and done with. Thanks for your feedback!
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 24, 2010
yeah
most decent flash I've seen today
Wow now I wasn't expecting that! I don't think so myself haha, thanks a lot
Rated 4 / 5 stars May 23, 2010
well
i liked this except for helens facial expression while running from the boulder and the ending but still some decent work
Yeah that's what I said to Dale but we kinda just wanted it over and done with. We're busy students ya see :P Thanks for feedback!
Rated 4 / 5 stars May 23, 2010
GOOD BUT
DONT HAVE ANY SENCE