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Bobs Fight

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rated 2.41 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Action
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bob
stick
fight
jimmy

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Uploaded
May 23, 2010 | 8:45 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Well If some people dont know i made an animation before this and it was jimmy i asked that every one say how i could improve it and here my improvements it took me about 2 days to make it i worked hard on it i dont really have time to be wasted so i just sat around doing this. :) Anyway it be really cool if u guys to again tell me what i can improve. its a bit short but my other ones will be longer and better so go rite ahead and review on how i can fix it up even more :D

Oh and if u dont get what bob says neer the end he says:

Take back what u said or ill tell the guys u got your ass kicked by a baby.

something like that.

Reviews


betterdayz502betterdayz502

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad.

I remember when these videos were the majority of NG



CheesiusCheesius

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Too much white space

There's not much going on in the frame other than just at the right side, there's a huge unused empty area off to the side, I'm not sure why you made the characters so small and off to the side like that. It would help if there was more in the background, so maybe there's a building they're guarding or something (maybe it's a white building in a snowstorm?). Also the EARTHSHAKING FORCE of the blows, where the whole frame shakes like crazy, the effect is good, but you've overused it. If it happens on every single blow then it's just distracting.


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XDarknessX2 responds:

Well here what happen i was animating and everything was looking well but for some reason when i added the Vcam it kinda of stretched i thought it was normal so i upload it and it dint look any different so i was a bit bum out about that. And i must agree with u that the fact i left alot of space empty. It was because bob when i made him sad i made him only walk haft way so i decided to make it look more on the side and i should have maybe put a background. also the earthshaking force is a bit distracting
but the point i was trying to show with it was that bob was pissed but maybe i could put it down a bit and make it the strongest on the end.

Anyway thank you so much for your review!


davidpuralocuradavidpuralocura

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

just need a ending (a better one)



quitestupidquitestupid

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

okay

i would have liked some voices though


XDarknessX2 responds:

Well i don't really have anything to put on that can talk and this just my second animation ever :O lol

Anyway until i get better im gonna stick to sound effects.


Wingle-FlotzWingle-Flotz

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Ehhh

The animation was smooth, but the sound was choppy, and it was a bit of a small scale.

Ummm... it was okay, I guess.