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this is a masterpiece for everyone to view!
The animation could have been much better, but it was a good style for the song as it was.
Can I get the name of the song? I would love to find it.
ITS CALLED HAPPY RABBIT BY COOL&CREATE
It's kinda cute but at the same time I'm kind weirded out. If it's supposed to be telling a story, the animation could be better planned out. It just seems like a bunch of randomness.
Since it cuts short, I'm assuming this is a work-in-progress. It's a good starting point.
One thing your animation could definitely use are stop and play buttons. As I'm writing this review, I have to listen to this song fragment over and over.
awsome but kind of short and the photo of the kid had nothing to do with the video
still pretty cool
but i didnt exactly love the random cut at the end
Needs some more work.
I will admit, song is nice, but, the way you abruptly cut it at the end is a bit amateurish.
The animations is not really special, a little sub-par in certain areas, I believe that if you were to try to spend more time on creating some frame-by-frame movements you could greatly improve your skills with flash.
Another thing that bugged me was how you sort of pulled a Monty Python at the end by coming to a complete halt at the end, which shows that you got tired of working on this or ran out of ideas, it really hurt your score in my opinion.
I'd recommend in making the song shorter and give it some real closure then to stop halfway, it would make it look a lot better.
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