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well this was my first flash work, literally , i just see like 3 flash tutorials and i start to do this! not a big thing but was my first try! so blame it if you want! its just a simple thing!
Not too shabby
After three tutorials? Keep it up!
Not too bad
Good job on your first flash. Keep on trying to improve, and maybe add some sound next time.
thanks! im workin on that, but i need the sounds or a GOOD microphone, but i think this week a friend will lend me a microfone, so my animations will improve i promisse =D (cuz if they don't i don't know why i enter this site xD)
It was alright
I liked the style you were going for, but generally it's a bad idea to upload your FIRST flashes. Good one though, keep at it.
well i upload it just to see what people say about my firt animation on flash, i never use flash before do this animation and i just want to know how bad or good is
well well well
If this is really your first flash work ever, you got quite the idea. You might want to add a more complete storyline, and spend more time on the art to smoothen the animation fluidity.
I only blammed your entry since this is obviously a test to see what you can do and the portal is supposed to be for final works, or at least pretty complete ones.
yeah about storyline, i been working on that (not about the dog) but i dont got so much imagination, i mean, i got the idea but i dont know how to improve it, about the art, god! it was horrible doing that! i do it with mouse and mi mouse dont work so well, but thaks god now i got a tablet! and ok i just upload it because i want to see what people say about it, i get sick when my friends and family tell me that its a good animation, cuz common they dont see animations in this page every day! but well thanks for the comment i wiil improve!
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