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May 23, 2010 | 5:57 AM EDT

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well this was my first flash work, literally , i just see like 3 flash tutorials and i start to do this! not a big thing but was my first try! so blame it if you want! its just a simple thing!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not too shabby

After three tutorials? Keep it up!


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars




Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not too bad

Good job on your first flash. Keep on trying to improve, and maybe add some sound next time.

juan-M-M-M responds:

thanks! im workin on that, but i need the sounds or a GOOD microphone, but i think this week a friend will lend me a microfone, so my animations will improve i promisse =D (cuz if they don't i don't know why i enter this site xD)


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It was alright

I liked the style you were going for, but generally it's a bad idea to upload your FIRST flashes. Good one though, keep at it.

juan-M-M-M responds:

well i upload it just to see what people say about my firt animation on flash, i never use flash before do this animation and i just want to know how bad or good is


Rated 0 / 5 stars

well well well

If this is really your first flash work ever, you got quite the idea. You might want to add a more complete storyline, and spend more time on the art to smoothen the animation fluidity.

I only blammed your entry since this is obviously a test to see what you can do and the portal is supposed to be for final works, or at least pretty complete ones.

juan-M-M-M responds:

yeah about storyline, i been working on that (not about the dog) but i dont got so much imagination, i mean, i got the idea but i dont know how to improve it, about the art, god! it was horrible doing that! i do it with mouse and mi mouse dont work so well, but thaks god now i got a tablet! and ok i just upload it because i want to see what people say about it, i get sick when my friends and family tell me that its a good animation, cuz common they dont see animations in this page every day! but well thanks for the comment i wiil improve!