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My second submission.
Thanks to everyone who contributed!
This is a good concept. Usually, any sprites that are fused together are mario-sonic related, but you've seem to have found a good story while involving many different sprites. I'm assuming there will be more sprites form other games as well given the title, so I'm looking forward to that!
Something to keep in mind is the length of your submissions. The first episode you posted (which I did watch) was a little long on the explanation side, though I did like how you tied in different images with the dialogue, that was a great choice to keep in interesting. For this episode, I feel like the conversation with the hologram was a bit lengthy, and should have gone to different images like with the first monologue you had. Other than that, everything seems to be falling into place!
Also, you get bonus points in my book for using old-school Star Fox graphics! =P
8/10, 4/5. Keep it up! And if you ever need an extra voice actor, let me know!
Oh there's more to come with the StarFox stuff ;D
Its certainly better than the first one, and I can see that you've put a lot of time and effort in it.. General. Next time General, maybe have some higher res sprites, it did get a bit boring looking at blocks all the time, I can see that you have talent and i'm sure you'll find a way to make it work better :)
Anyway General, Have a nice day General, and looking forward to the next one..
The animation was top notch, there's no denying that. Visually, this video was very impressive. However having said that, the writing was atrocious. Some of the dialogue made me want to rip my ears off, I'm sorry to say. Maybe it's because I'm not particularly fond of cheesy fan-fiction or fan-fiction at all for that matter and this is about as cheesy as fan-fiction gets without getting into the Adult Only stuff. I just think you're mashing too many fictional worlds together. ...not that you can't make it work mind you. If you're going to continue this, I'd recommend taking a little more care when writing the characters dialogue, and maybe watching that your evil empire isn't to cartoonishly evil. ...unless that's the effect you're going for.
You did really well. Im interested in seeing your direction with this.
i can understand graphics are hard to do
but dialog and orginal characters is not your strong suit
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