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My first flash entry. This is the prologue to the series.
Episodes 1 and 2 were originally episode 1 but I had to split them because of time restraints. Sorry if this piece is a bit bland. Just think of it like the opening to starwars ;D
Special thanks to Delaciel and DruoxtheShredder for lending me thier talent.
Yes its a prologue, but its a boring prologue... and too long...
The voice acting is nice, and i'm currently loading the second version :)
Agreed with the person below, add a choice for the text, its not needed with the clear voice.
Nice Voice and Beautiful Story Telling.
needs ALOT moar grafix and sprite animation, make it like a cinematic movie
loose the text - the voice is clear enough on its own - maybe subtitles instead.
and perhaps some background voices and sound-effects. and this would be epic. or simply move on the next project whatever ^^
Yeah this was just the prologue. Episode 2 has alot of action and I released it today!
Thank you for your review!
For the most part I was expecting some sprite action to be implemented, but I'm pretty sure that this was supposed to set up for the next part of the series. I would say though that the story in itself does provide some interesting concepts so I'll be looking forward to what you have in your next episode.
I released episode 2 today as well! There's alot more to that one!
Is that all?
Too much diary entry, could use editing. The log is actually really, really boring; the whole time I was thinking - is she still talking??? Show, don't tell. A better idea would have been to have her voice over, but show images of what she's talking about. Also, it's not necessary to have everything read to us and the color you chose was difficult to see against her image. Last thing, please use spell check.
Well it was just the prologue to set up the story. Episode 2 was posted today as well! there's alot more in that one!
Thank you for the review!
While he was narrating it should have probbable swithced to what happened. But the story seems really great!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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