Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
Dorris is going for a strole when suddenly he is confronted with a strange button. This button is pressed resulting in Dorris shrinking. Join Dorris on his epic adventure to find the grow button!
A cute movie, but that's all this one has going for it. Poor animation, graphics, plot, effects, and technique. No sound or music, or a coherent plot to be found at all. I can't say I enjoyed this movie - it was dreadfully dull and had no humor aside from how badly it was made.
There is some hope though, for this movie to be saved. I think that adding some sound such as music or sound effects would definitely help make this movie worth watching all the way through. Improving your animation techniques and the overall quality of the characters, settings, and objects would also be a great thing to include. Adding an ending screen with a replay button so that the film doesn't loop forever (unless that's the point) should also be here. Maybe having the characters talk or having some sort of narration would make the movie play out like a children's story - something that is surprisingly popular with the NG audience.
Why this movie wasn't BLAMmed in the first place, however, is beyond me. Please keep trying, I believe you can definitely make this movie a real piece of art if you practice a bit more.
yeah looking back this is very shit.
did you even put any effot in this?
be honest, because if you did .....you didnt use enough
this isn't good at all try getting better at animating before submitting them here.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.