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An advert for this thing where Museums open at night time, and various activities and stuff are held.
A burglar tries breaking into one of these Museums, only to find it's open!
Short and Sweet...
...just like this review!
THE GOOD: Fine animation, fitting music, good ambiance, nice punchline delivery.
THE BAD: Some jerky frames, is an advert, really short.
SUGGESTIONS: Add a few more frames of animation, extend the plot a bit.
FINAL THOUGHTS: Not a bad movie at all, but it could stand to be a bit longer.
i thought the animation was great, and fluid.
i enjoyed the style and the color theme.
i also got a good chuckle out of it.
I Liked it.
This was surprisingly good for a short. Usually, I find them lacking because they cut off abruptly with an unsatisfactory, rushed conclusion. This one, however, I felt conveyed the humor effectively in the short amount of time (30 seconds or so).
The artwork was fairly commendable; nice job there. The simple percussion music also fit the setting and pace well.
My main criticism is with the animation. It's very choppy from frame to frame most of the time and seems discontinuous. That's why I'm rating only 5/10, but overall it was very good for a short.
Your animation is awesome. Smooth and stylish, it's perfect for a longer cartoon. However, DON'T RUIN THE JOKE IN THE DESCRIPTION! Good thing I don't read those otherwise it would have severely undercut my reaction your submission!
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