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Not a good flash
It's barely a flash at all. The backgrounds are hideous, the animation is pathetic, the character is ugly, the use of gradient effects is almost criminal and above all else it's completely unfunny and uninteresting. Next time, think before submitting crap.
Look, if you hate my guts, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to sound mean.
I enjoyed that short skit quite a bit. I liked the idea and the concepts that you put in there. It was a bit difficult to understand the video at some points, but the comedic values far surpassed that. The audio quality was a bit, errm, sketchy. The quality of the song itself was horrendous, the louder parts nearly broke my speakers.
All in all, I'd say that the drawing style and comedic interpretations made this flash fun and interesting.
Keep it up!
My 2 cents.
Quality in this was lacking consistency. It had times when it looked like you spent some time to draw while others it looked like you put in 5 mins of time max.
The music quality was lacking as well.
You did try and sync the audio with what was going on, so I will give you that.
Most of the video I was beside myself wondering what the hell is going on, because it was a lot of random unfortunate events.
I think if you were to give the story... a little back ground it would help. For example if we knew he had an important meeting or closing sale thing he had to make it to.
It missed a little more graphics and music volume botthered me a bit in some parts. The animation, comedy and music quality in background are ok.
Simple, but it has Potential
Despite the simple animation style, I kind of liked it in a way. I kept watching to see what would happen next. It's not overly hilarious or anything, but it's not a bad piece of work. I'm thinking once your drawing/animation skills improve, and once you've got a few more flashes under your belt, you'll be pretty good.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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