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Ro's First Adventure

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rated 2.04 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Action - Platformer - Hop and Bop
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May 17, 2010 | 5:48 PM EDT

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Author Comments

I just made this and it is my second game I made. I am planning on making a sequel that has moving bricks, more levels, different backgrounds and so on. Thanks!!

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KauvinKauvin

Rated 2 / 5 stars

What?

Good graphics and music, but the gameplay is very bad. Why does the character never die? How stops music? Why not win if I found 3 exits? :{



noreality1noreality1

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I had no idea

...that people still listened to linkin park.



CevoxCevox

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nice for your second game.

This game has some potential, but does have a few problems. Now, I will break into parts to tell you what I thought of the game.

--Graphics--

This is where the game needs work, I know you probably just wanted to finish the game, submit it, and show it off to all your friends, but I think you could've tried much harder when drawing the things.
Also, something that I see on a lot of "nooby" submissions are tons of gradients on random objects. I am sick of seeing a lot of unnecessary gradients, they don't look good most of the time. I would personally rather see solid colours, especially on the pick up items.
The guy isn't that bad so I don't really have much to say about him. A small issue I saw was in the background, it didn't cover the whole screen. Not game breaking, but certainly something that can be easily fixed.

--Music--

The music did not fit the game what-so-ever, so you should rethink that, or at least think about what kind of music will fit the game better for future submissions.

--Gameplay--

The game wasn't nearly as fun as it could've been, if you made the framerate higher to something that is more acceptable in games then it would've been better. I am guessing that the framerate was 12 fps, which is okay in animations but flash games need something higher, like 24-30 fps.

--Overall--

If you fix some issues mentioned, and clean up the graphics a bit then I would rate this much higher. Unfortunately, it seems you didn't put too much effort into this and probably more or less copied it from a tutorial.

Your final score is; 5/10 and 3/5


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CapnKanuckles responds:

Sure! I will work on that in my second game! Thanks for the feedback.


AllmightyShanAllmightyShan

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Not bad for a 2nd attempt

Needs intro & instruction screen. Music is good but not really appropriate to the game. Hard to control movement.


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ZeroSpawn47ZeroSpawn47

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

keep trying

not too horrible for your second game. but you should pick an actual song, many people hate that band. go for a more neutral song loop