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Hey, whats up Newgrounds? It's been forever since I've submitted anything.
Here's something I made in class, just a cute little video.
Drop a review if you want, i usually respond to them all.
-I see what you did tharr budday. Lead us into believing we were going to see some epic fight scene only to be graced by the epic sounds of it.
-Regardless of that it was pretty well done. Nice little plot with some funny little lead-up music. It's drawn and animated pretty well. I just wish it would of been a little longer and didn't leave loopholes like how Pablo got down into the middle of the battle from his fortified position.
-Great little short story overall though. It flowed smoothly and everything was well drawn. The marching sound could of been a little quieter but armor isn't exactly quiet now is it.
-Review Request Club
Thanks for the review
Kamehameha? Lolwut? o_o
This is the last piece of work I'd expect to hear a Kamehameha from, lolllllololllll.
Animation is pretty solid and slightly above average. The framerate keeps itself strong and steady which makes me happy camper. I'm about as stumped as Coop was as to why the epic fight scene wasn't animated. Dx I was like "OH BOY A CANNON! Here we go.....*note of laziness* fuuaaaaak!" Oh well, you did a pretty good job anyways for a short animation. 6/10
The art is kind of chibi'ish but that's not a bad thing at all. It's just a little bit different from what I've seen so far since my return to NG after almost a year of being off of the scene. I enjoyed watching something with little people for a change. You got the idea of dimensions and stuff down pretty nicely too (for example, Pablo entering the castle) which is good enough for a small rating boost from me. 8/10
Sound was top notch. It delivered in a nice quality even with the audio being compressed like it always is out of flash's natural instinct. There was room for a tiiiiiiiny bit more variety in sound but oh well, it's good enough. Sorry, I always got to find something to nitpick at just a little. >_< 9/10
As for humor, well the art style could be thrown in here since it adds to the silly factor of this short animation. Other than obvious things I found to be slightly humorous, kamehameha, enough said to be just plain random because nobody uses that anymore. They've all moved to shoop da whoop now. 7/10
Overall it was an interesting little shorty animation. I'd willingly give a bigger review with a most likely better rating if you were to, oh I don't know....animate the epic fight scene for us? Pleaaaaaaaaaase? : > 7/10
[Review Request Club]
Hahah, my computer teacher told me no violent fight scenes after I showed her the script so I through that in there. Thanks for the review.
I thought there was going to be some other sort of gag, rather than that "I couldn't be arsed to animate" line. It was going so well and then the way that the cannon was presented was a great precursor to a suitably epic fight scene. What I didn't get was why you didn't animate the fight.
Still, there's some good work here and the animation is superbly rounded, though I was surprised not to see a single cow in this piece, nor even hear a cow noise from the battle sounds that you used.
A little more work and making the fight scene would really help you here. Good luck :)
Lol, thanks coop. No cows in this one unfortunately. Some more may be coming along though. Thanks for the review
it wasnt really awesome but it was worth the watching.
the audio and the animation were good.
go ahead like this and u could become a great flash artist ;)
Why thank you sir.
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