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Just threw together some thoughts, memories and so and i managed to squeeze this out.
Music: Stereophonics - Fiddlers Green
I started this a couple of weeks ago and pushed it all the way,
It was rather fun because i used tablet to get the animation i needed :3
Description of the movie:
A guy has a dream about him loosing the girl he loves
but wakes up and realises everything is fine.
Nothing was actually fully animated: in one scene it's either someone blinking or moving their hand.
Improvement: show more movement, refrain from choppiness and try doing most of the scenes frame-by-frame. Also scenes with full-body movement would be much better.
If you can't animate full-bodies properly then go back to animating stick men.
i'm giving you a 50, because half of the animation was shitty, while the other half was actally good.
Ow, my eyes.
You started off really strong, but then you just went to blurry and jerky animation.
Plus, the character you animated clashed with the background style.
Have it's potencial.
It looks quite good, art was mostly good... Thou i don't see it as an animation, most parts a just a slideshow with a little mobment.
Alot of people said this sucks but really you have potential. You ventured into making full bodies and pulled it off ok to. It was a little boring but heck the animation was not that bad and it had a creative thought. The grass looked really good throughout and the loading bar had nice style to it. Keep trying and dont take the other comments so seriously!
A short film about a park bench
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