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this is a very short animation so i hope u like it
Very very short, a 7/10 for the amazing animation
there's this thing called effort...
There was no plot, it was unoriginal, the rock golem animation was bad, I assume you meant "to be continued", no background image(s), no sound, overall no substance. If this was a test that's one thing, make sure you mention that. If you have a script for this, expand it, actually put forth an effort and make this at least a half way decent, if however much unoriginal it's destined to be, flash. If you don't have a script, write one, do something interesting at least, come up with a plot line at the very least and implement it, it's a lot more fun to create for a purpose than to just put together garbage.
Overall, work on a storyline and your animation, if you don't know how a character would move, act it out yourself what you want the character to do, take notice what parts move and which don't etc. Also backgrounds would be nice...
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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