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Finish it up

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was notbad the {AUDIO} was ok but it was very {SCRATCHY} its a quality issue, so maybe to better understand it maybe you should add some {SUBTITLES} and while it was black and white it was pretty amusing the audio was the best part and i like that you had some decent animation, allthough you should add abit of {COLOR} even if it was just a touch, just some things to think about because this one could be much better with the few suggestions already made, But other then that, also seems unfinished with the two guys staring at eachother at the end, so while it was ok could still use more effort and needs to be finished, anyways nice job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now while its just Black and White. it wouldnt hurt to add a touch of color, maybe just a focus spot here or there, just odd stuff that could be colored not the whole thing just a touch of color here and there, I like black and white style flashworks, but if you added some color like touches here and there, just differant focus points, doesnt have to everything but just here and there, the little points, it would help present a more variaty of color and style of your presentation. Now I mention Subtitles only because its not hard to understand or anything but its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such. Also seems like its unfinished at the end it just stops with the two guys staring at eachother you should finish it with an edning credits menu or something.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall its an ok little toon black and white, and amusing but could be finished and cleaned up.

hehe

That was one of my top ten movie scenes of all time, so good use of audioclip, the drawings were simple but pretty decent all the same, the visuals of his verbal decriptions were pretty funny, the minimalist animation style actually worked pretty well here, but I do kinda wish you did the whole scene instead of cutting it short, and there were parts that could have used just a small bit more detail.

Flawed, yet at times very good

Well, I found the voices to be good. I would've said awesome, but there were some cracks caused by the mic in there every so often. The graphics were pretty good, and I loved the black and white style. The animation was pretty fluid too. I would've liked to see some gray mised in to give it a true black-n-white feel, an it could've been a bit longer. It was generally pretty good though.

BHT: Full Metal Jacket

One of the best black and white flashes iv ever seen good job :D it was funny.

Oh, shame, should've been longer

This had potential to be a good movie had you had more of it, it really was way too short, it was mildly funny and I liked the graphics style, it was kind of entertaining to watch at the end but didn't really have enough to make it a good movie, it ended as you were expecting more as well, which didn't do anything for it, perhaps you could remake this only making it longer and sorting out the sound, this movie as it is is a bit crap and is only worthy of a 1 in my opinion.