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Hmm could use some improvment
First of all the "IDEA" is good and concept of it all, but seems like you "RUSHED" this or something, The interest level of the game only lasts a little abit so you should think about adding more of a "FUN-FACTOR" maybe adding a mini game would be nice, or a few mini games inbetwen your own game here, its something differant and would be a nice touch to this and ofcourse bring up the quality and entertainment level aswell, and as for audio and music there was very little, if any at all, try and chose something from the audio portal, there lots of choices, and for sound/fx theres lots of websites that you can use sound/fx from just takes a little effort, Now this game could be better, but needs more effortmaybe some extra stuff added like sound and some slight new ideas with in the game but in the end it was alright.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would start off with some "MINI-GAME" option now i suggest tha idea because the interest level drops out right away so you need something to spice things up, so having a small mini bonus game within your game might improve on it. This also lacked audio and sound/fx or atleast more of it, so add more in that area.
Too short, but the concept is interesting. Programming is good.
didnt like it
too short, too easy, nice concept though thats why you got 3.
you can draw in black over the red lines and theresw unlimited ink, therefore you can just rule out anything that can make you lose the level and give lives so that its harder if you lose too much.
Meh.. Just ok.
I will just be very honest, this game isn't really that good. The progamming is good. The idea is also ok, but this game gets boring quite fast and there are quite some things that you can improve on.
First of all, there is no music added in this game. There are also barely sound effects, except for when the ball bounces. Come on, add some music tracks or sound effects and i'm sure that your game will be directly a lot better. I see that you also didn't bother adding additional stuff in this game. Make obstacles, enemies, items, whatever. This is just very plain and simple, also for the graphics. But this can also be a style you're going for, so the graphics don't really matter that much. But overall this game gets boring fast, especially if it doesn't have any music or barely any sound effects.
I also noticed that there is an ad that you see everytime you finish a level. I think i speak for everyone by saying that this is just annoying. Why does there have to be an ad for everytime a level is finished? I'd remove it. The last thing is the hit detection of the red walls. I've gone right through these a few times without being stopped and just finished the level this way.
So overall this game is just ok. It's not a really amusing game. If you can improve on these things i'm sure that you can set up an awesome game.
2/5 - 5/10
Our reward for beating each level is an ad? No thank you. That aside the game is not very original or interesting, certainly not worth the ads.
0/5 0/10. Kill the ads and it might be passable.
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