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simply short video
Needs a stop action code
Well here was an interesting and entertaining flash video the "CHARACTERS" were actually pretty cute and creative, i noticed this flash loops , you can fix that easily with a stop action code, by also addings osme play and replay buttons it should run better and not loop as to not allow users to miss something or come in on the middle of it and such, dont get me wrong this is a pretty neat flash here cute and lots to see but most of all the looping should be fixed, and also maybe fill in alot of the bland spots the white parts outside of the door scenes, a basic color would help but the white is just too bland if you ask me. so fix the looping ad something to the bland white spots, make the video somewhat longer and you should have something pretty decent here.
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fix the looping with a stop action code, fill in the bland areas, and as mentioned make it longer with even more stuff going on
abit short and needs some fixing but is entertaining for the mostpart
I agree with everyone saying that this needs sound. Sound is one of the most important parts of any animation and the lack of sound on this animation is a major loss that will probably do you more harm than good. But on the bright side, the animation is very well done and if you could just remember to fix up the sound next time this would probably be a pretty funny animation.
You did a good job with the animation, It's well animated and anything, I liked it. The sound is very importante in an animation, and you indeed failed in that point, because sound is what makes an animation funny. Just that, but keep up your work with animation, you're doing well.
so many people play with this concept it sjust not funny, animation is good though, plus needs sound
The thing that really kept this from being a lot more enjoyable was how there was no sound. I am pretty sure that there are some good stock sounds going around that you could use, like for the guns. It is still an okay video because the animation is nice. Sure, there was nothing but a white background, but the designs in this seemed really original. There is definitley potential for you, but you do need some more things put into it. I like the expressions of the characters and how slick they are.
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