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I envisioned this story when listening to "Clubbed to Death" by Rob Dougan and knew I had to turn it into a flash. One of my earlier works it took a very long time but I was always proud of the outcome. Please tell me what you think.
The artistic side of this flash is not so impressive, the drawings are quite bad and are unrealistic, as is a lot of the animation that was done. However, some things are shown that say you're not a louzy artist. I liked the simple 'spin' you added to the flying bullet just by putting in a line that travels down the bullet to make it look like it's rotating, also, the hands holding the guns are quite well done in the first scene with the mobsters walking up to the car.
The better side of this flash is it's purpose. You described it as being inspired by a song, and you wanted to turn it into a flash. You did this well. Even though the quality of the animation was weak, it fitted the song well, and I didn't get 'bored' while watching it or anything, it was actually fairly enjoyable. The little girl involved in the story gave it a good emotional twist as well.
Animation & Drawing - 2 / 10
Storyline & Feeling - 8 / 10
You have my 6 / 10.
The + 2 for this being one of your earlier works. I must be honest, I haven't seen any others of yours, but the bonus points are given in good confidence that your artistic skills have since then improved.
thanks for the honest review I appreciate how much feedback you gave. I hope my animation and drawing has improved. Check out a more recent animation i posted called "Crappyday" when you have the time, I would like to know if you think I have improved. THANKS!!
Good job for it being one of your earlier works.
I didn't actually expect it to be so good after seeing the loading screen and the first few bits, though I was wrong. I especially liked the ending.
This is flash alone proves that you don't always have to have superb animation and drawing to make a decent movie.
This is amazing!
OMG! the music helped this so much, but it was so good, the build-up, the climax, the ending. It was amazing.
The only problem i had was that for the amount of bullets fired not many hit the bodies, maybe next time use more characters so you have more to kill, or just fire less bullets. Either way, it was amazing
This was really good.
Nice. You did an amazing job on this!
Keep it up!
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