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May 8, 2010 | 6:17 PM EDT

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Eh... Got nothing much to say except that this was my original FIRST flash. I started this about two years ago when I was new to flash (and I also slacked off through half of it.) I kinda half-assed it towards the end since I didn't get anymore inspiration from it. Just don't assume that this sums KronoUniverse as a whole since this isn't my best work.

Last thing I got to say is Love it or shove it.



Rated 5 / 5 stars May 8, 2010


i love it the humore is perfect and the plot and backgrounds are thing though is to speak louder...speaker better..and dont do the subtitles..awsome flash though u have real tallent

KronoUniverse responds:

Thanks for the kind words! I'm working on better voice acting but as for subtitles, sorry but I'm going to make to keep them due to my awful accent.


Rated 2 / 5 stars May 8, 2010


I liked it a lot, funny ideas here, but you GOTTA work on the voice acting, that's why I rated so low, please please please work and fix the voice acting,

and the action is too slow, make it a lil more fast paced

other then that, it's a pretty good job, look forward to future flashes once those things are fixed.

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KronoUniverse responds:

Thanks for your concerns and I'll be sure to work on everything. I mostly work on 12 FPS (Yeah, REAL slow) but I've been working with higher amounts (sometimes 16 or 18, since I'm not ready to advance to a full 20 FPS)

As for the voice acting, I mostly do it while I'm alone since I don't want my family thinking I've gone insane due to screaming and the sort. This time, however, it wasn't the case. So you only have me to blame.

Anyways, thanks for your honest opinion.


Rated 4 / 5 stars May 8, 2010

Good first flash

The sound was a bit off at times but otherwise for a first flash it was pretty good! well done


Rated 3 / 5 stars May 8, 2010

I like it!

At first I thought it was going to be crap becuase of the pic quality vs the filesize. I thought it would be a long music track with scribble and no redeeming features. However, as the music was well timed and themed, I didn't have a problem with it.
However, if you can trim the filesize down without loss of quality, please do so, over 7M for a simple story is rather a lot.

The story developed a bit and I enjoyed the style. The animation and art is simple, but it does the job. The sound is good enough and the VA is also good. I am glad you took the trouble to subtitle though, as it would otherwise be hard to follow.
The storyline is random, but on NG, that's fine!
Its quite funny- not a barrel of laughs, but it made me smile. If you want english voices, contact me- my Crew. the Dragons & Spirits, can provide them.

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KronoUniverse responds:

Really? I thought the storyline was plain at best but glad to see you liked it. As for filesize, I trimmed down a lot of the things I had, but I guessed I missed a few things...

As for voices, thanks for the help and I'll be sure to contact whenever possible!