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THIS IS A DEMO! I just wanted to hear all your opinions. THIS IS NOWHERE near finished.
This is a promo for my friend's story.
Not ready for posting.
The story has potential, but the animation itself is not even "NOWHERE near finished" yet. There's not much to review here, because the movie at this point basically consists of a handful of static scenes and a few lines of text.
I will say that you have decent selections for music, although assuming you didn't write it yourself it should probably be credited somewhere. It also does seem like you have a story that you want to tell, but unless this was a REALLY quick effort I think that the story might be a large challenge for your animation skills. Not to discourage you, but if you are a beginner at animation then it might be a good idea to put a lot of time and effort into short completable films that we can ACTUALLY review instead of trying to create a massive epic and posting demos that, as Dracomario99 points out, kinda suck.
If you do intend on finishing this, you will end up cutting a lot of corners, so at least try to cut them in a way that could be considered artistic (eg. get a good narrator to read the story and 'animate' it as a series of tableaus -- static images [think slideshow] that you can put a lot of time into. Yes, it's a bit of a cop-out, but honestly, if you want to turn that wall of text into an animation and this demo is actually representative of your skills, it might be your best bet).
Good ideas. Thanks.
stupid storyline and shitty drawings and then its only a fucking white screen
Ever heard of constructive critisism?
I liked this.
Nice Sci-Fi story line, but work on the drawings, there is no rush unless you are being paid.
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