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My Cemetery

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rated 2.65 / 5 stars
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Uploaded
May 8, 2010 | 11:38 AM EDT

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Author Comments

well this is my first animation in flash, i just learning to do it
i hope you like it

Reviews


LimEJETLimEJET

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Really nice for a first try!

Ok, now that the compulsory "good-a-job" has been doe, on to the critique!

Firstly, those black borders should be static, as in put them on top of the flash and anchor them to the sides (I think it's called anchoring, anyway).

The animation...
Well, there is no actual animation, so let's just call it a translation. The translation is a bit jumpy, and could be smoothed a bit.

The slime coming off of the zombie arm is kind of cut-off, but I'm sure you know that already.

Still a really nice try, and I'm encouraging you to do more in the future.



ChoclateChipChoclateChip

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

great first animation

well its a great feeling, but the movement is a little bit slow
(its called movement? i don't know^^)



DNotoriusDNotorius

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

The graphics' great, just continue this thing


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JordanHellsingerJordanHellsinger

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Frizzlin' Coo!

Nice zombie arm, I might add.
I was expecting a screamer, though.
Still awesome.



iamthearbiteriamthearbiter

Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad

it doesn't jump out at me but it isn't bad either so i give a 4 out of 5 keep the practice up