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2010 History of Computer

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For my college class.

(review if you want.)

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Alright, I liked it!

Simple, informative, and to the point. I learned a few things from this as I'm sure others did. Great job man!

DevintheDinosaur responds:

Thanks :)

its not bad

it was informative and well made

DevintheDinosaur responds:

Thanks you kind sir :D

Did it on flash just cause?

Apart from the opening animation it seems like you didn't really need flash for any of this. Hitting this up on powerpoint prolly could've saved you time which could have been spent making the individual slides a bit more interesting, which is my main beef with this. I imgaine sitting in a classroom listening to you give your presentation while looking at a screen with a bunch of words on it... boring...

Putting some pictures in with the information would certainly make it more interesting and give people a good visualization of what you're talking about instead of waiting till the very end to get a quick glimpse at everything. Some minor, VERY minor sound effects wouldn't hurt, might keep those of us with ADD from staring off into to space. Animation at the beggining seemed hurried, but served it's purpose.

Now what I like was that we got to click our own way through it. YAY!!!!!! Information was straight forward and to the point. Easy to digest for just a quick 7 min or so presentation. Also the quick review round-up of the different computer types that were discussed at the end was appreciated.

This gets the job done, but it's not anything I'd really wanna sit through in class.

DevintheDinosaur responds:

I actually didn't up presenting it. But yeah, thanks for the constructive criticism, I actually agree with you totally. I'm glad you liked aspects of it, and the other aspects you explained WHY you didn't like it, that's what I call a helpful review :)

Nice... I guess?

It started off well with an animate entrance but it went downhill for me from there.

to be dead honest with I pulled a tl;dr and basically skipped the info and to my dissapointment there was only a tween at the end. There is no real reason for this not be made in powerpoint as it was just slides with info. I think it is obvious this would've been better with narriationb but you said that in your presentation that you will speak over it.

Anyways although I am unimpressed that doesn't matter lol, hopefully your teacher likes it. Good luck on your presentation :)

DevintheDinosaur responds:

I see where you are coming from! Thanks for the input, although I'm sad you didn't enjoy it, I think you should go back and read what I wrote, as it is actually pretty informative. But anyways, no harm no foul right? Thanks for the review!

It wasnt that bad

It had some good information. And if they had tried to cover all the other types of computers and advancements in the field, then it theyd probably still be working on it

DevintheDinosaur responds:

Thanks, I did only have a certain amount of time to do this,
so if I had longer it would have gone a lot more in depth and would have had more animations and explanations. Who knows maybe I'll redo it for fun *shrugs*

Thanks for the review though =D

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