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We have a lot of work on it (i dont speak english very well :$)
This is our first movie.
Its a cute flash you have here and such, but i noticed it started right off the bat as soon as it loaded, now this kinda thing seems to bug a few people but there is an easy fix for this, and that would be by adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" you can do a search for the same name in the flash forum or just ask anyone for help in the flash forum how to add this, but anyways what this does is stops the "LOOP" from looping from the start of the movie now onto your lil flash here, it was a cute little animation with some intersting stuff going on, i noticed this flash was abit confusing like the 3 days ago scene and such, also the flash seemed abit on the short side, so while i found it cute, it still needs abit more, so maybe you can work abit on this one
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code so it doesnt start off , a play button at the start seems much better if my opinion, also this would be nice if you added more to the story, and a longer more understanding story aswell
a short funny story could use more
frankly, I get the reference to a similar AOL based farce, but without even great stickman animation and the ending that was the epilouge, I just don't understand why this exists. Needs to make more sense than Icon rages against counterpart. Try again.
I liked the "3 days ago" part xD
and only with an amethist? wow... he was lucky as shit... and for no reason at all xD
kinda decent flash actually ;)
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