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A new Cartoon made by me.This time its not a paper flash. Everything drawn and animated on the computer.This Cartoon shows the importance of friends and family and the danger of
being alone and hate feelings.
i like the surrealness of it all.
the room and the window are all great metaphors. But it would help to develop it a little bit more. The contrasting colors, red and black, those are good ways of getting a stroy across.
some of the frames had white slivers, like your pictures were not big enough and it let a little of the background showing.
a good way of preventing that is to upload it to your, "Dumping grounds" to see if it all pans out correctly.
thanks for the hint
Needs a preloader tho :D
Don't let yourself be killed
I like the idea of a person going mad over time, trapped in a room, without knowing time and space. The art of the room itself gives that idea of our mind making us feel lost over time.
But then, the character(s?) animation has nothing to do with the room ambiance, the voice work is very poor and you could have developed his madness, without giving it a face, like it was the devil.
But of course, you would need more time.
But I'm sure it would be worth it.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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