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Dile wants to enter his entry on a special day based on Pico Day. He needs Rhino's help
I've updated my flash more, and you should be able to hear my voices better. But it still has limited animation because I was rushing due to Homework and Stuff
this was pointless
nice try with the sound effects .....................................
Not bad, though needs more improving.
From what I can tell, you probably are new to Flash. Flash is difficult to use, I know, but I can tell you have tons of room for improvement. Though before I go on, I would like to congratulate you for the length of the video compared to the file size of the SWF. The audio was pretty good, though I could here the BOOMs in them. And I do believe the program you used was Audacity, not Audiocity.
It looks like you animated this all on one layer. From the usual 'forgetting to fill in the teeth' and the constant erasing of certain areas of the eyes and other stoof well. There is too much "squiggle" on the brushstrokes. It would be better to use the straighten line tool on Flash 8 or just animate with lines. Though the lip sync was very good and the use of language was pretty nice as well. You could have drawn the characters a little better, especially the black guy who blammed the flash.
Nice effect on the Iron Man and the postman voice. Though don't over use it, and use more variety in voices. It sounded like this was voiced by two different people. It would be better to make it sound like a whole cast of individual people. This wasn't really a parody at all, but rather renaming Newgrounds and Pico.
Transitions were not great. The background wasn't really appealing and the words were poorly written. Try to add a cool background and add some actual Text. Nice use of music, actually. Pretty good considering (once again) the small file size.
In all, good job on the flash. Needs improvement. But keep practicing and you'll be a professional in no time.
A short film about a park bench
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